Smoking is something habit that some people like to do, they do this habit rapidly to fritter away their time than chattering. Sometimes some people smoke in public room or in a place where they have to meet somebody else who don’t smoking. In nowadays health issue, they told us if smoked in public place may cause some problem to the people who don’t smoking. To become a passive smoker may cause a lot of trouble with their health.
Our government has been regulated to ban all the people who are smoking to do not smoked in public places. Although this regulation has been declared, there are several people ignore the regulation. We have to concern to this regulation, because the smoker ought not to broke the right of the other, they have to appreciate the other right by not to smoking in public places.
Finally we have to be more concern about the regulation that our government made to banned the smoker to don’t be smoking in public area. But we can’t forbid the people who like to smoking, as long as they don’t disturb the other right. It depend on the people, sometimes the smoker can understand about the others, so we have to be polite to give them a chance to stop smoking.
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Smoking is kinds of habit that some people like to do it. They like smoking for killing times rather than to chat something useless. Sometimes this people do smoking in public area such as at train station, bus shelter even on the train or on the bus. According to health issue, smoking in public place may cause some problems to the people who not smoking.We calls this person as passive smoker.Do you know the meaning of passive smoker ? Passive smoker is.......
Our government has made regulation or warning for those people who smoke not to smoke in public places. Although this regulation has been declared, there are several people still ignore this regulation. We have to concern with this regulation. They have to appreciate the other right by not smoking in public places.
Finally we have to concern about this regulation.But we can’t forbid the people who like to smoke as long as they don’t disturb the other right.
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Smoking is something habit that some people like to do, they do this habit rapidly to fritter away their time than chattering. Sometimes some people smoke in public room or in a place where they have to meet somebody else who don’t smoking. In nowadays health issue, they told us if smoked in public place may cause some problem to the people who don’t smoking. To become a passive smoker may cause a lot of trouble with their health.
Our government has been regulated to ban all the people who are smoking to do not smoked in public places. Although this regulation has been declared, there are several people ignore the regulation. We have to concern to this regulation, because the smoker ought not to broke the right of the other, they have to appreciate the other right by not to smoking in public places.
Finally we have to be more concern about the regulation that our government made to banned the smoker to don’t be smoking in public area. But we can’t forbid the people who like to smoking, as long as they don’t disturb the other right. It depend on the people, sometimes the smoker can understand about the others, so we have to be polite to give them a chance to stop smoking.
Your writing has already got improvement but still need more practice, especially how to arrange the sentences.
Your score still 54
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